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| Traditional Art / Drawings / Other | ©2012-2013 *kay-sama |
a group dedicated to making the first Teen Titans fan film. Our first feature was centered around Robin the Tim Drake version and we close yours because is wowed us greatly. Keep up the fantastic work and if you wish to see the feature it is here: [link] Thank you for making such a great Robin!
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Your background is simple, a swirling blue, but I really like how you've managed to capture so many different shades and it makes it interesting to look at without distracting from Robin.
And lovely highlighting and shading here, again you've done a particularly good job where it's gold, it almost looks metallic!
There does definitely seem like there are aspects of this piece that you could work on though. You leave the area around his feet a light gray on the otherwise black circle, which looks odd to me. Also, because it's lighter it does draw more attention to this area. There's another lighter area around his hand and to the left of the R. I don't mind the lighter spot in the loop of the R, that seems to be working, but I don't think it works well in the other areas.
His right arm, the one behind his head, also seems to be a little bit off. In fact, both arms seem a little short, but the one behind in particular. The distance from the elbow to the should is too short in either case and then the forearm needs to be longer as well.
His feet also are on the smaller side. They seem to be smaller than the size of his head, which is why they strike me as being very small.
Orginality: Although Robin is not your OC, you showed him in interesting pose.
Technique: Excellent, simply excellent. Shading and anatomy are correct, I see that you can use your tools in a perfect way. It makes your pic eye-catching. Congratulations.
Impact: In my opinion the background is the weekest part of your art. I would like to see something there, not only one shaded color. Anyway the pic act good to me.
Besides all this thing I would make characters more realistic, if I were you. Cartoon/manga style is ok, but (semi)realism looks simply better.
I hope you find this words useful. :]
Cheers,
Fan.
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